Evil Alien Eye - The Screenplay

Fade In: Interior Bedroom: Early morning light comes through the drapes as we see two humans in a tall bed. The male and female are snoring loudly. Under the sound of the snore we begin to hear the drone of the Evil Alien Eye.

Evil Alien Eye (evil-like): Buuuuuuzzzzz

The Evil Alien Eye (EAE) shifts it's eye from left to right and back again as it searches for our heroine Fin. Fin sits nervously at the mouth of the bedroom door (just out of sight of the EAE). She looks at the light coming from the window and notices it is getting brighter. She paces nervously. She scoots quietly farther into the room and checks to make sure she is still not in EAE's vision.

Fin (timidly): Meow... [there is no response from the humans and she checks to make sure the EAE is not able to see her] MEOW!

Still no response from her human parents. We see our heroine crouch low to the ground and scuttle quickly by the EAE on it's dresser perch. She is still safe from it's evil glare.

EAE (louder as it senses the presence of our heroine): BBBBUUUUUUZZZZZ!

Fin: MEOW! MEEEE-OOOOOWWWWWW! [still the humans sleep on]

Fin sees the light is even brighter and rightfully senses it won't be long before the Evil Noisy Box on the bed stand will come to life and attack her sleeping Mother. She must make her move now. She moves quickly to the foot of the bed and leaps up onto the bed. She races down the side of her Mother, using her as a shield.

Fin (yelling and pushing her sweet paw on Mom's face): MEW, MEW!!

Mom (sitting up quickly): Huh? What? Finny? [Mom scoops Finny up in her arms, and turns towards the EAE. Fin begins to flail] See sweetie you don't need to be scared, it's just a heater. See how warm it is?

Fin breaks free of the hold and races back to the safety of the hall. Mom hits the Evil Noisy Box into submission, at least that danger has been adverted. She watches in horror as Mom gets up and walks closer to the EAE.

Fin: MEEEEWW! Run Mom! Run!

Mom grabs the EAE by it's throat and chokes it until it's eye stops glowing. Mom and Fin walk into the kitchen for a celebratory meal, leaving Dad and EAE alone. The light begins to glow again...

EAE (quietly yet with menace): Buzzzz

Fade Out


  1. Oh Finny, what an harrowing ordeal! You are a very brave girl! xoxo

  2. That thing sounds evil and dangerous! I would not go near it!

  3. Oh my goodness! I think you are so very brave! Much more so than me!

  4. Oh my gosh! What a brave brave girl!
    Do you go back and save daddy too? Or is he on his own?

  5. Hahaha Fin! Better hurry back to check on Dad after your meal!

  6. You are so brave and wonderful to protect your parents like that, beautiful Finny!!!...Happy Mardi Gras, precious friend=Laissez les bons temps rouler!!!...xoxo...Calle, Halle, Sukki, Mommy Cat, Daddy Cat

  7. Vanquishing evil is what cats is about! Yeah Fin!

  8. EeeeEEeEEEKk we are cowering! halloween went by a long time ago! Love Helen, Darcy and Bingley xxx

  9. You are beyond brave, Fin. I take my hat off to you (it’s now off!) Austin would run in the other direction!! and has done frequently!!!

  10. Oh Fin, we are so glad that you saved your mom from that evil eye. That was really very brave of you to save Mom and yourself. Hope all of you have a great day.

  11. OMC! That EAE is a terrible thing to behold. You are very brave to try and save your mum from it.

  12. That evil eye sounds pretty scary, Fin. Thank COD your Mom was there to save you!